Thursday, February 7, 2008
More on my script...
I believe writing a comedy was much harder than I expected it to be. As much as I envision these characters and the ways in which I would like to portray their personalities, it is hard to get them all to come together. I know how I want Morty and Natalie to meet. I see how the situation with Natalie and her head coach is going to happen, and how her boyfriend is going to react, but nothing after that. But I guess that is a beginning. When it comes to Natalie, and her head coach. I want it to be over the top and silly. I want them to be on a trip somewhere for a competition and end up getting belligerently drunk with each other because of then getting drunk. Her head coach will not be the best looking person in the world, would preferably look like the coach from Clueless, but will look like a hot male in Natalie's eyes. You will get a POV shot from Natalie of her coach blurred into a celebrity such a Brad Pitt, and she has her relations with her. While this is happening, you will see her boyfriend outside of their window with a bouquet of flowers and a balloon saying "Maybe Next Time". He will leave heart broken and that is where I am stuck. I hopefully will have more to say tomorrow....
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