Friday, February 15, 2008

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So I have decided to make Morty not attempt to kill Natalie's boyfriend until the very end where he succeeds. I thought that having him try and try again and again with fail, would put it back into the comedic way in which it started which is not what I am looking for anymore. I want to focus on his characteristics, and why he is so crazy. I want to show how obsession takes him over and make him so disconnected from reality. I want the audience to really get the sense that everything he is picturing in his head is truly happening until the very end. Every time Natalie passes by, there will be a VO on what he exactly think it means when she glances his way, or brushes his shoulder, I want it to drive him absolutely insane. I want the audience to see how he plans the murder, how he follows her boyfriend everywhere he can for the 2 weeks of planning. I do not have a name for the boyfriend yet, but since he is going to be a Jock, I was thinking something like Bobby. I do not want his character to be kind of on the tough side when it comes to appearance, but be an all around nice guy in school.

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